One thing I don’t do very often is rewrite my poems. However I have rewritten one called ‘I Believe’ and it got an amazing response when I read it recently at a poetry event. What do you think……………….
I believe you
When I stare in your face
And see a happy smile
Beaming back at me
I believe you
When you tell me you’re
Happy to see me
And kiss me gently
I believe you
When you hug me tightly
Squeezing me warmly
Feeling your skin on mine
I believe you
I believe every word you say to me
Every touch of your person
I take it literally
I believe you
Because I know no other way
And whether you truly mean it or not
I still believe you
Beautiful!
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